Looking for a Dragon Age Beta.

[prisoner_24601]

So I have this Dragon Age fic that kind of just popped out but it needs another pair of eyes to look at it. It's an Alistair/Anora/Male!Grey Warden (Amell) almost romance, but kind of not. It's probably technically slightly AU. Looking for g/s/p feedback, character feedback (especially with Alistair - who I'm not sure I have in character), and pretty much anything else that might need work.

It's short - about 3000 words. If anyone is willing to take a look, let me know.

Comments

[kosiah.livejournal.com]

Sure!

If I'd played the game I'd be willing...

[nivenus.livejournal.com]

But I haven't, so my feedback would lack some understanding of the characters.

On the other hand, if you're aiming for your story to be understood by those who haven't played the game (as I sometimes attempt) you could send it my way. I'd give it a look over.

[noneko.livejournal.com]

Oh man, the Alistair fangirls are going to throw a fit.

I'm excited.

[xenzen.livejournal.com]

I want to play Dragon Age. :(

[xenzen.livejournal.com]

No monies. :( Also, I'm not sure my dinky little laptop is capable, since it couldn't run Mass Effect. :/