Looking for a Dragon Age Beta.

[prisoner_24601]

So I have this Dragon Age fic that kind of just popped out but it needs another pair of eyes to look at it. It's an Alistair/Anora/Male!Grey Warden (Amell) almost romance, but kind of not. It's probably technically slightly AU. Looking for g/s/p feedback, character feedback (especially with Alistair - who I'm not sure I have in character), and pretty much anything else that might need work.

It's short - about 3000 words. If anyone is willing to take a look, let me know.

Comments

Re: If I'd played the game I'd be willing...

[prisoner--24601.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for the offer, but it has major gigantic spoilers about the ending and I don't want to ruin the game for you.

Re: If I'd played the game I'd be willing...

[nivenus.livejournal.com]

Be happy to see it when I'm done though ;).